The Other Place Blog 2: The Between Place

The Other Place

(a semi-musical Steampunk hybrid story)

Blog Two:  The Between Place

Chief Shabuni steps into a natural corridor where everything is tinted blue.  Giant trees grow everywhere along a carpet of stones.  Directly before him is the root in the shape of a nest.  A little farther away is another block of ice.  He hears Lady Oolong’s voice in his head, your clothes are beside you.  Gather them but don’t wear them yet.  As he gazes around for his shirt, vest, and trench coat he notices his chest, belly, and arms are invisible.  His heart begins to race. 

Don’t forget to grab a few of the shimmering stones in the shape of eggs, Lady Steamsail’s voice tells him.   

He sees a leather bag with drawstrings on top of his clothes.  As he bends down to gather a few eggs he opens his mouth to ask why.  His eyes bulge painfully as he feels his breath rush out.  Desperate for air he grabs two of the oblong rocks and tosses them into the bag.  Without hesitation he picks up his clothes and heads towards the block of ice. 

Through the ice he sees a bustling street.  There’s something strange about the people but he can’t worry about that.  His body is crying out for air.

As he takes a step forward the image in the block of ice disappears into swirls of mist.  There’s a face behind the whisps of grey.  He’s nearly at the block when he jolts to a stop.  A woman with enchanting green eyes stares arrogantly back at him.  His skin crawls in horror at the sight of her sharp fangs and the blood stains that run down from the corners of her mouth.

I see a stovepipe hat with goggles, she sings in a mocking tone.

Trousers and shoes

And absolutely nothing holding clothes

And a leather bag

A spectre, a wight, a ghost?

She inhales from her nose.

A tinge of magical power

But not anyone I’m looking for

You may pass

He realizes its good that he held his breath in terror the whole time she sang.  The image of the street reappears and he dashes towards it before there is no oxygen left inside him.

Original photo by Leah Weir

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Author of the epic fantasy adventure story BARD: Owner Of The Gemstone, the Sci-fi series Children of the Myth Machine: Queen of Caelum, Sylvia, Achebe; co-author of the sci-fi story: BRACKISH; the sci-fi mystery story: Lucy and the Snivel Chair (all available through amazon.ca). Join me on a journey of discussing stories already written and ones you'll get to see develop first hand. Years ago I belonged to the Cambridge (Ontario) Writer's Collective and it made me a much better writer. So I hope my continued journey will intrigue you and maybe inspire you to take that first step into the unknown. Because that's where the excitement is!

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